This design is definitely in our top 3. There are some things we'd change about the layout, but overall a very strong entry. Only thing missing was a dimensioned interior plan; consequently, we can't tell how big the house is.
UPDATE: Thank you for resubmitting the design with the requested changes. Frankly this was one of our favorites, and we had a hard time deciding between yours and one other. We felt like we could build this with a minimum of alterations, and we really liked the exterior as well. The upstairs was my wife's favorite out of all the submissions.