Glad to see you have addressed the criteria including thinking about shading
Deck doesnt quite reflect actual shape of the angular finish
I like the fact that this one proposes going above the other roofs levels... it's an option that could create a better interior and also prevent more headaches with water. The louvers are also something that makes a difference. Still isn't easy to remove during summer and I'm inclined to think a bit more about this issue to give it a solution.